The Boring day

It was a boring day on Sunday . Gloria[my sister]Caspian[my brother]and I,played with the lego.We played in the living room,we didn't play with the lego-men instead we played with the crazy-bone's.I bought 3 new crazy-bones that we played with.We made lot's of cars and spaceships for them. Gloria and I didn't get out of our bed clothes the whole day! Caspian got out of his at midday . Dad said ''we should go to Whites bay ''we said''NO!''.So we carried on playing our game. Dad interfered again and said we should go on a walk NO! we said so we carried on playing our game. A little while later we went outside with the crazy-bones,we made it that the crazy-bones had gone to mars! My crazy-bone went to pick marzybams from the marzybam tree!Now I'm going to tell you what crazy-bones are . Crazy-bones are little figures made from plastic, they are not hollow . They have funny faces on them they come in all shapes. They are all different colours.

By Isis       ( Can you tell we are learning about making our writing interesting?)